Critical Review – Superstore (2015)

I was originally going to review the Peter Gabriel concert I went to last week, but I wanted to give that a lot of attention and this week I’m finding myself in a position where I’m not feeling so great, and since I already skipped out on writing yesterday, I picked something I could write about that was a little easier to work with, NBC sitcom Superstore!

Isn’t this show over already Brent? Well yeah… but I’ve been rewatching it (currently available to stream on both Hulu and Peacock) and it’s just been so much fun, and I hadn’t personally heard much buzz around it, so I figured it was worth a revisit.

Superstore is a 2015 comedy that ran for six seasons, centered on the lives of retail employees at a Walmart-esque store in Saint Louis, Missouri called Cloud 9. As a Saint Louis native, it’s a treat to hear local references sprinkled into the banter between the characters of this ensemble cast, but that’s just a small part of much larger appeal.

While the show focuses most frequently on Amy (America Ferrera) and Jonah’s (Ben Feldman) interactions, the standout acting from Store Management duo Glenn (Mark McKinney) and Dinah (Lauren Ash) and other store staffers played by Colton Dunn, Nico Santos, Nichole Sakura, Kaliko Kauahi, (and so many more) really define what makes this series great. If that weren’t enough, the customer “vignettes” peppered throughout highlighting the things customers do in retail stores when they think no one is watching are hilarious, accurate, and provide a perfect balance to the storytelling.

There are few lulls throughout the character’s misadventures and as I’ve watched through these, there is rarely an episode where I don’t burst out in laughter. Storylines often arc across several episodes and there are plenty of callbacks, so newcomers should consider watching from the beginning, but if you find yourself starting an episode at random you’ll still find a good appreciation for what’s happening throughout the shows six season span, which ends around the same time big box retail began seeing many of its own troubles, during the tumultuous reign of Covid.

I’m not going to bother working out a clichéd, “catchy” ratings system for these reviews, I’d rather plainly tell you what I think, and in this case I think it’s obvious that I love this show. It’s not without an occasional mis-steps, the least believable of which is that the male lead, Jonah, is sometimes intentionally unlikable, a choice that makes some of the other character’s attractions to him read a little flat and feeling more superficial than they otherwise would be. It does drive the story occasionally, but a lot of the time I find myself asking why Amy, Dina, Kelly, and even Glenn are so supportive of him, especially when it’s so often to their detriment. That has nothing to do with Feldman’s acting ability, I blame it on poorly planned writing, and it’s not enough of an issue that it ruins the rest of the fun.

Ultimately I think if you haven’t seen Superstore, you should give it a shot. You don’t need to have worked retail to find yourself identifying with this fantastic cast. If you have seen it, it makes for what my partner and I call good “background viewing”, which means you can work while it’s on and it doesn’t rely on so many visual gags that it would be unwatchable.

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Journal: More Format, Less Calories!

Before I get into the whole writing conversation, which will be a big part of my journaling until I figure out exactly what all this is, I think I should spend a few minutes talking about what else I’m doing… but if I’m being honest, aside from working, it hasn’t been much!

I do play pool every week and have been improving a little every time. I actually have a 4-2 winning record right now and was MVP for my team last session, which is huge for me. Especially if you knew how bad I was at it when I began! My team is great and I really look forward to Thursdays a lot because I get to socialize and just generally forget about my usual stressers for a while.

Otherwise while I’m still at home working, helping out my partner, or during my downtime, I usually have a lot of bandwidth available for watching television, so you’re probably going to see a lot about that in these journals. Two standouts that are on a lot around here are the unfortunately now ended, brilliant NBC sitcom Superstore, for when I’m just watching alone, and when I’m with April, the Apple+ suspense masterpiece Silo is getting high regards. I won’t go into details about wither shows here but I highly recommend both if you get a chance.

The last other big thing on my mind is our kitten Bubbles. She’s getting spayed in the morning and I’m a little worried about her. She’s a sweetheart but she’s in heat which a) is annoying as hell and b) presents an elevated risk for her surgery. They reassured us by saying it’s not as bad as if it were a dog, but that doesn’t really tell me anything so I’m still super nervous. Feel free to wish her luck in the comments.

Okay now for the writing stuff!

Something I didn’t really clarify yesterday was that I’m not here to develop anything specific so much as to work on my blind spots and get better. I love writing, but when I’m left to my own devices the end result has a tendency to fall flat or tangent into a rambling mess. To avoid that I’ve decided to schedule out my writing formats, attaching subjects I struggle with more on days where I tend to be less busy. Additionally, I decided to reward myself with a regular day off because I’ve tried this before and burned myself out by setting my own expectations too high. I play pool on Thursdays so there’s not much time that evening anyway!

I was originally planning on writing out why I picked each topic and what those topics entail, but then I remembered yesterday’s post and realized that was a huge waste of everyone’s time, so without further ado:

THE SCHEDULE!

  • Sundays: Personal Guidance
  • Monday: Journaling
  • Tuesday: Science Fiction or Fantasy
  • Wednesday: Critical Review
  • Friday: Drama or Thriller/Suspense
  • Saturday: Reader’s choice or AI prompt

You read that right! On Mondays I’ll be looking for suggestions from my readers for my Saturday prompt, so please feel free to post your ideas in the comments section below! I’ll hand select the winner based on what sounds like the most appealing subject and make a best effort short story based on the results on Saturday! If no satisfactory recommendations are made, I’ll ask AI to come up with something at random and work from there!

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Personal Guidance: On Brevity

My worst habit is writing more than necessary because I enjoy long words and superfluous phrases, but in hindsight I realize that it’s selfish and done at the cost of readership. Here’s some tips I plan to use to curb this habit:

  • Planning out my work’s intent ahead of writing.
  • Using bullet points to drive focus.
  • Removing anecdotal or repetitive themes.
  • Finding good balance between brevity and clarity.

A great example of brevity in writing that I recommend frequently is Albert Camus’ “The Stranger” at just under 31,ooo words (give or take a translation.) If anyone has any other tips specific to keeping it “short and sweet” please let me know in the comments!

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The Toll Bridge

I hate taking walks.

Don’t get me wrong, nature is pretty and I’m thankful for this whole “wondrous miracle of being alive” or whatever.  If you want me to be completely honest though there’s a laptop at my house that’s full of games, anime, and porn and it’s just sitting there waiting for me to get back to it.  Instead I’m out here, and if you’re wondering why then I have five words for you: God damned Greg fucking King. Continue reading

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Lost things

crowd

When I’m watching people
it’s not a game of who has the funniest
walk or the weirdest face,
instead I think about what
they’ve lost. It could be a keepsake, a
tooth, a loved one, or a mind.
It doesn’t matter, we’ve
all lost something along the way,
even a newborn’s lost it’s first home.
It’s a unique game in that it’s
simple to master, but impossible to play.
Still I do, maybe hoping I’ll
find my own lost things there.

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25 Incredible Facts You Won’t Find In A Book (Because They Are Completely Unsubstantiated)

Hey you.  Yeah you, in the Christmas sweater.  First of all, dude come on… it’s August.  Second, do you like lists?  YOU DO?  Awesome, because I’ve prepared the mother of all lists right here.  It’s epic and wondrous.  Do you have to go to the bathroom?  If so, I recommend you go now.  I’ll wait.
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An Open Letter to People Who Read Open Letters Written By Celebrities

Let me start with a disclaimer lest anyone get the wrong impression here.  I am not a celebrity.  This is not an open letter from a celebrity, nor is it specifically written to be read by a celebrity, though if a celebrity so chooses then I guess I’m down with that.  This is an open letter for those folks who would generally read open letters to celebrities from other celebrities, and though I may have lost some readership the moment some of you found out I was not a celebrity, I feel that it’s important that I fully disclose who I am so you realize that I am an honest person with your best interests in mind.
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Magnesium burn

Magnesium Burn

Trembling as I try to warm myself with a memory.
A flash and a buzz and
a word I’ve left in a sea of them.
How I prized the beautiful, the tragic, the fear.
So quick to die,
so bright still that I watch for it in such a starless sky
drifting further and further.
Even now its shadow stains the inside of my eyes.
My voice is raw. My arms are weak.
No smell and no taste,
only ever (and just sometimes) thought of.
Who are we now? What is left?

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13 Texts from After the Robot Apocalypse

FOREWARNING: I wrote these years ago for a weekly piece I’d been doing called Future Photo Fridays on my personal Facebook account. I didn’t really find it that funny, but it was probably the most read and requested thing I’d ever done at the time so I kept making them. I’d written these with purposeful inside references and didn’t expect them to reach an audience outside of a largish group of friends and acquaintances so if any of this doesn’t make sense, that’s why. I’m still leaving it because some of it is “sort of” funny I guess? Whatever.

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Four things I know virtually nothing about, even after searching on Google Images to get these pictures

4.  Ospreys

An Osprey and a fish hanging out.  Is this what ospreys do?  Scare the crap out of fish for fun?  It's hilarious if that's true.

I love this picture a thousand times more than I actually care about what an osprey is.

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